Revised Narrative Revised 21/10/10

To get the basic idea of a person having a vision we could do either of these:

• Have the protaganist having a nightmare
• Have the protaganist having a day dream
• Have the protaganist seeing things that aren't their

We decided to have the protaganist in a day dream and possibly use a medium still frame like in dawn of the dead and napolean dynamite but in ours she would have a loving look rather than a gormless look to signify romance and appeal to a female audience.

• Why a vampire and a female would be out in the middle of nowhere at night:
• We could either have them camping.
• Not have it at night.
• Or have it in a more commonly used area for a teenager.
• Perhaps theirs other people and it's a party.

We decided to use the camping idea so we could still have it at night and still stick within the conventions of the genre to frighten our audience.

• Why the vampire chases the protaganist.
• He loves her.
• He cannot help it he's a vampire.
• He's a rapist or totally evil.

We decided to include the use of love to appeal to a female audience and we decided to show the vampire as a victim to his vampireness as in Twighlight.We decided to go with a young countertypical vampire because it is easier to create.